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December Theme: Childhood Memories

Hi, I just wanted to share this work as it's one of the themes for this month. I used ink, colour pencils and oil pastels. I'd love to hear any things I can do to improve! Its a bit experimental as of with the child-like drawing of the background.


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WOW!! This is so beautiful - I love the inclusion of both a more realistic style and a style reminiscent of childhood drawings. You've captured the bright feeling of childhood really well! One of my only suggestions is that the composition is a little heavy on side (specifically the right side with both the sun and butterfly); you could maybe work on balancing it out a bit. This could be done by shifting the balloon on the left to the right a bit to fit in the rule of thirds a bit more. But, other than that, this piece is really phenomenal with a lot of soul!!

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